correction anglais - Aide aux devoirs - Emploi & Etudes
Marsh Posté le 16-01-2006 à 21:41:08
qq indices sur qq erreurs:
to people
advices
exchange of
1000£
work
in England
"it" has run out
that I find
do money
j'arrête car je fatigue, dsl...
Marsh Posté le 16-01-2006 à 21:09:31
Si quelqu'un pourais me corriger ce texte merci beaucoup.
On the one hand I would have looked for a job, and I would have asked for help to people in the city to have some advices.
On the other hand I would have accepted to give a package of heroin in Tokyo in exchange of 1000£.
But I am desperate and I am suffering from a serious disease because I have headaches and cramps, so I am weak. I cant imagine work.
I would like to buy a ticket to return in England because it has run out but I am penniless. Thats why it is necessary that I find money.
Either I can accept the package of heroin to do a lot of money in a record time instead of working. However I risk to be trapped for the customs officers, then to be locked up and even to get a death penalty. Moreover its not worthy of woman and I wont feel up to look myself in a mirror because I would do something punished for the law and I wont be honest.
Or I work to earn money but its long and its difficult because I am ill.
In both cases, its not reasonable thats why its preferable to go to the British Embassy to get a loan or ring my family in spite of my pride.