alors voilà j'ai une revue de presse à rendre demain et j'ai oublié de donner un des résumés d'articles que j'ai fait à mon prof pour qu'il me le corrige avant de rendre la version définitive .....
Quelqu'un peut il m'aider ?
MERCI !!!!!
 
 
 
 
 
Le texte :

 
The oil price have risen because of the political situation in the middle east in the interval of wesnesday to Friday. Oil price is more expensive since Friday because of the Turkey-Iraq relations, particularly between Kurdish rebels and governements. Turkey’s governement has decided to attack them. So, the situation is very stressed and everybody throughout the world is afraid of it.
 
 
According to one of their members, the OPEC wants to clear from the price of oil rise too much. OPEC chiefs will meet themself in November in order to work out a solution. But for the moment, anybody can express about the OPEC’s plans.
 
 
Today, the oil price is four over expensive than in 2002. Countries have more and more needs oil because of their rising economy, for instance : China or India. The oil price will be ready to break the record of 1980 when a barrel cost $90 ! In september, OPEC would increase the oil production to answer of all the needs.
 
 
I have chosen this article because today, the oil proce is a big problem.
All cars needs oil and it is too expensive for individuals but not only : all our economy is based on it. Oil is so at the core of a stressed political and environmental situation. Perhaps it is the moment to work out a solution and find a new energy who are less expensive ?

Oil prices have risen because of the political situation in the Middle East between Wednesday and Friday. Oil prices rose on Friday because of strained relations between Turkey and Iraq, particularly between Kurdish rebels and the two governements. Turkey’s governement has decided to attack them. The situation is very tense and everybody throughout the world is afraid of it / (what may follow).
 
According to one of their members, the OPEC wants to shield itself from an excessive rise in oil prices. OPEC chiefs will meet in November in order to work out a solution. For the moment, anybody can express themselves about the OPEC’s plans.  
 
Today, oil is over four times more expensive than it was in 2002. Countries such as India or China have more and more oil needs because of their risingeconomies. Oil prices will soon break their 1980 record when they rose to over $90! (nb si je ne m'abuse, on est passé au dessus de 98$ la semaine derniere). In september, OPEC said it would increase oil production to answer needs.
 
I have chosen this article because today, the price of oil is a big problem.
 
All cars needs oil and it is too expensive for individuals, but notonly : all our economy is based on it. Oil is at the core of astressed political and environmental situation. Perhaps it is time to work out a solution and find new energy  sources that are lessexpensive ?
 
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il date de quand ton article? j'ai collé aux temps utilisés, mais parfois ça donne des trucs un peu incohérents.. (cf prix du brut à 90).  
 
(tu as un lien vers l'article?)
 
désolé si le remaniement est parfois excessif, c'est pas évident de corriger sans reformuler, des changements de temps ou de structure induisant souvent d'autres changements dans la phrase..

cet article date d'un mois.
C'est super sympa de m'aider en tout cas !
Merci pour tout !!!!!!!