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Marsh Posté le 27-04-2008 à 11:56:25    

Bonjour, j'ai un exposé en oral à faire. Merci d'avance pour la correction :
 
I going to talk about my favourite serie, "Dexter". It's not famous. I love this serie. It' on Canal + and maybe on TF1. It's a adaptation of a book of Jeff Lindsay, Ce cher Dexter. The day, Dexter Morgan is a expert in blood in the police and at night, it's a serial killer. He was in a new family, the family Morgan. He was taken by a officer in the police. Without the offcier, he can not have a social life. Dexter fells no emotions. He killed only the killers. He loves the blood. Before killing the victims, he take the blood of his victims. Only this father know which people. Watch this serie. The first season is short. I wait the second season. In America, the third season start.

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Marsh Posté le 27-04-2008 à 11:56:25   

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Marsh Posté le 27-04-2008 à 12:01:41    

auri93 a écrit :

Bonjour, j'ai un exposé en oral à faire. Merci d'avance pour la correction :
 
I am going to talk about my favourite serie, "Dexter". It's not famous. I love this serie. It'son Canal + and maybe on TF1. It's an adaptation of a book of Jeff Lindsay, Ce cher Dexter. The day, Dexter Morgan is an expert in blood in the police and at night, it's a serial killer. He was in a new family, the family Morgan. He was taken by an officer in the police. Without the officer, he can't have a social life. Dexter felt no emotions. He only killed the killers. He loves the blood. Before killing the victims, he took the blood of his victims. Only this father knew which people. Watch this serie. The first season is short. I am waiting for the second season. In America, the third season start.


 
Le peu que je peux corriger. Sinon, niveau construction des phrases, c'est pas top top. Je ne comprends pas certains passages.


Message édité par Mister Williams le 27-04-2008 à 12:04:15
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