Dear sir,  
 
As a part of my formation in ISAT (Institute Superior of Automobile and Transports) in Nevers, France, I have to carry out a practical training period of 4 months. I would be interested to coming in Great Britain in order to improve my knowledge of the language .I am keen on working for a firm that has a reputation throughout the world, and involves in sport cars racing.  
 
TVR with the unique design and engine, is the only manufacturer to build such radical and exotic cars. Moreover, the performances of these cars outclass all the best cars of the moment.
 
For these reasons, I should like to carry out this work experience with TVR in the hope of working for your company in the future.  
 
I should like to offer to your company my strong motivation and  my sense of responsibility, in order to work in a technical office or on prototypes. I would however be prepared to consider any other positions you may have to offer.
 
 
 
Yours sincerely.

tu les brosses peut etre un peu trop non, tu trouves pas? ca aurait été ferari ok mais TVR...

quand je lis ça je bénis le ciel d'avoir quitté le circuit

 
Bardé de fautes, illisible, pire que le CV...
 
Le couple gagnant effectivement Le mec qui recoit les deux hallucine bien
 
Je précise que dans le CV du gars se trouve la ligne :  
English: fluent; preparation with the examination of the TOEIC  
 
Mouahahahaha
 
http://forum.hardware.fr/hardwaref [...] -1.htm#bas

il manque une phrase dans ta lettre:
Translated by google...

fluent !!!!!!
j'avais pas fait gaffe.  
mais bon peut etre voulait-il qu'on juge le fond plutot que la forme.
j'ai lu entre les lignes mais le coup du "I should like to offer..." entre autre ne passera surement pas.

 
En gras : incorrect
En italique: pas génial
Et j'en oublie un paquet...
 
Inspire toi plutôt d'une lettre-type.

On dirai que tu fais un stage car c obligatoire, il faudrait le tourner autrement, dire que t un balese en tel domaine, que t'as des qualité smais pas dire que tu doit faire un stage obligatoire.
Marque pas que t fluent si tu envoies ce genre de lettre

pas grand chose à rajouter, sauf qu'en plus je trouve ca un peu court

je reveille le topic
voici ma lettre:
 B117
 Campus Saint Jérôme
 5 Avenue du Merlan
 13014 MARSEILLE
 France
 
         
         21 November 2007
 
Deluxe Digital Studios
Hollywood
 
 
 
Dear Sir or Madam,
 
I am writing to apply for a job as a Field Service Engineer in your firm. As you can see in my enclosed curriculum vitae, I am an industrial engineering student at a French engineering school, I am specialised in computer sciences and I graduated in June (French equivalent for an M.Eng). My main reason for wanting to work in your firm is that I want to make a career abroad and your firm is a leading supplier of DVD post production services to some of the largest studio production companies in Hollywood.  
 
I believe my English is adequate for this job as I have been studying it for several years at school, that I spent 2 months in the USA in 2006 as a trainee.I have a lot of experience working with people and can fit into a team easily, because team work is an essantial part in my studies, as we worked as a team for lot of projects. I believe I have the energy,skills and enthusiasm to make a valuable contribution to Deluxe Digital Studios. I also have great adaptation and resistance to the stress capacities, even when under pressure.  I would certainly be willing to consider any other engineer job you might offer me.
 
Please find enclosed a copy of my CV. I am fully prepared to be available for interview at your convenience.
I look forward to meeting you.
Yours faithfully.
 
 
merci de me dire ce que vous en pensez

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